U.S Soldiers Gone?
The Crowd roars in the opening of possibly the world’s greatest concert. People are cheering for them, roaring louder and louder. At one moment the sound stopped and the Singer dropped to the floor. Blood was gashing out of her neck and a bullet was logged in the hole. Someone had killed the world greatest singer. Everyone in the world knew about this shooting about 30 seconds after it happened.
My pager went off and I was being called to duty. My name is Nathan Nichols and I am a government official used to track down the worlds most wanted people. Adam Gordon and I are the only two trained in this field. We have every possible training we can get to succeed in our line of duty. I think I may have told you too much already. Well it started out when I was a little kid. I had seen the movies with the navy seals and I always wanted to be that guy. Then I had seen the borne movies. Then I really wanted to be that guy. Granted I did not want to be on the run but I wanted to be the one chasing him. When I enlisted into the army I was talking to my sergeant and I said something about my dream of being this. Two days later a three star general showed up and offered me a code red confidential file. I read the file and instantly accepted. I offered Adam a way out of his line of work once I was enlisted in the program and he accepter immediately also. As a team Adam and I are unstoppable. We have completed 100’s of missions. We even have taken a 300 person army down by our self’s.
Enough about us, we were being sent to find the person who killed Sarah
Bright-man. Adam and I showed up at the scene and looked at all the evidence. We put together a lead and went after him. When we arrived at his house he was gone, no were to be found. I accessed his life files and checked to see if he owned any other buildings. We found one and grabbed our boat and went after him. We arrived and there were guards everywhere. Adam hacked in the network and disabled the cameras and all security devices. Once this was completed Adam took one way and I took another and slowly killed off people as we went. I arrived to the man we were looking for with much difficulties. Before he had time to respond I shot him with a tranquilizer gun and locked his hand and feet together and went after Adam. I crouched around a corner and found Adam on the floor with a man in front of him with a gun. I slowly came around the corner and shot him in the back of the head. Adam had been shot in the leg.
We returned the man who had killed Sarah and we were honored. As soon as we were done with that we got sent on a national mission. We were never seen again.
By the public.

2 Comments:
At January 25, 2008 at 11:02 AM ,
Anonymous said...
Not bad. It was a pretty good story.
At January 25, 2008 at 11:33 AM ,
Ali(solation) said...
How would a story written by you sound if the plot line was this:
A man by the name of Dane lost his wife when she gave birth to his son. His son's name was Jared (named after his grand father). After his loss he relized was only worthe what you make it. So he went all out and made everything worthe thinking about. People he knew wanted to know how he did it. After he thought his life was going great and his son was making all the right choices he found out from a coworker of his her daughter was pregnant from his son. What should he do? Stress put pressure under his son? Make sure he makes the right decision? It used to be in life you had to marry the one you made pregnant? What should he have his son do? Why didn't his son tell him? Does his son lve this girl? Or was it a simple mistake? ...
If you think you can handle a plot line like this write it. I want too see what you make the outcome of the story...What will be the details? What will happen to the fathers thoughts? But it was just I don't know do it if you want otherwise I have another story outline again!
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