Fright nights!
A crack of lightning Shattered threw the sky and Thunder Rattled the windows harder then a rock concert. Crying came from the upstairs bedroom of this huge 6 bedroom house! All four kids rushed to their parents room. The power was out and the dad grabbed a flash light and packed up his truck and yelled at the kids in love to get in the truck! little did the kids know the cyclone of death( a tornado) was close by. Once everyone was loaded in the truck they drove down to the night club that their dad owned. Little did anyone know that little kid that was crying was me!
My name is Nathan Nichols and I have had a really ruff life. shortly after that night My brother Chris attempted killing me. He Cracked my head open with soda bottles and video tapes and anything you could think of. I went to the hospital more times then the doctor I believe. Oddly enough I bet he never thought I would be saving his life.
Do you know when you join the army you have to vow to never leave a fallen soldier behind. You must do all you can do and be all you can be to make sure you and your unit and soldiers are safe. Sucks huh, I know scenes Chris and I and War partners. Chris went into the army reserves when I was still a senior in high school, to make something of his life. He finished basic and AIT and moved back so Sparta to work at fort.
Finlay the time came for me BIG Nathan to go to basic. I though it was fun and it changed a lot of things about my life. The day came I was going home! I board that plane and fly to the air port in Madison Wisconsin. I get to the air port and wait. I waited 3 hours and no show of my parents. Neither my mom or my dad showed. My dad was supposed to get me I thought. I had just talked to him on the phone that morning before I left fort. I called him and he answered and asked if i was home already. I told him that he was supposed to pick me up! He informed me that something had come up at the house and he asked my mom to pick me up.
So I hung the phone up and called her. No answer..... Finally I got a call back, and there was a man on the line. He told me that my mother was going threw an intersection and a 18 wheeler couldn't stop due to ice and crush the car. My mom was in a coma and my step dad was killed. I was devastated I didn't know what to do, I doped to the ground and cried. I didn't get home for three days later, I stayed at the air port and just sat there. My dad Finally showed up in worry about me and took me home. After all the changes in basic and all I did to make a great job so I can support my family they are all gone.
Two days after I had arrived at home my brother and I got a call from our platoon commander. My Chris and I we being deployed On a Secreat mission with 12 other guys to roam the mountains in Afghanistan to locate bin laden. The worst part was, the orders said we left at 1700 hours, It was 1400! No saying good by no time for recovery, no staying with my mom in her time of need. We were being deployed and there was nothing we could do about it. Of course my brother thought the whole reason for what had happened was my fault, so we were always fighting. We were boarding the plane and I tripped and he made a smart comment. He blabbered to me " good job why don't you kill your self when your at it, Get up" I got up and punched him in the chest and attempted to get him in a choke hold. our commander grabbed up and threw us in different directions in one motion. He yelled that we need to knock it off , what had happened was a shame but it wasn't either one of our faults, and that chis and I were war buddies and we couldn't leave a 10 foot radius of each other. If one got yelled at we both did push ups. If one needed help the other was there. If one needed to go to the bathroom the other one was the door so people couldn't see.
It was horrible, We fought so much. We kept bumping each other. Finally we got off the plane and went straight to a helicopter. We arrived in the mountains about 30 minutes later and had to ridge line down. As soon as we landed we were taking fire. Three men In front of me Were shot! Chris Jumped behind a huge rock and I attempted to but my shoe was caught on a branch. A Gorilla(thats what we call the enemy) seen me and started shooting. I Really don't know were they learned how to shoot but they cant hit me. Chris unloading a full clip on him runs to me and help get me shoe out. Looking up I see someone standing behind him. Without thought I kicked up and forced him to his knees and shot him in the neck. To my surprise it was a gorilla!!!
With in minutes Chris and I were threw people and all of your back up was dead. We had killed a close to 70 people. Chris was walking crouching down trying not to be seeing and he fell in to some hole. I rushed over to find him and he was in a choke hold by the man we were look for him self. Bin Laden was there WE FOUND HIM!!! I yelled to drop his weapon that we were the united states army and I am required to use force to disable the weapon. All he did was yell in Arabic and I couldn't understand it! So I gave Chris the eye and he kicked his leg and I shot his Hand. Chris then swiftly kicked him to the ground and zip tied his hands behind his back.
I called for transportation and gave them our coordinates. They finally arrived about 30 minutes later and about craped them selfs when they seen just use two and we had him. When we got back Chris and I receive the Medal of honor and we bother received a pay stub that read, "$250,000,000". We didn't know that the army still had the 500 million reward on him and we got it. It was amazing, we were being flown home on our own privet jet. We were all on the tv and all over the news . people loves us and Iraq Crashed and the war ended!
Chris and I put our money into an account together and payed for our mom to get better. She Finally made a full recovery and didn't believe anything that happened. With the rest of the money we slit it up and gave some to every one of our soldiers family's. That makes 13 family's and 14 guys millionaires and the end to a war. Never thought one night of fear could turn into a life time of wealth and a country of happiness did you!
Now Chris and Megan are married and have a baby boy on the way. As for me I'm taking car of my mom and trying to make sure my brothers and mine friendship stays strong. Strangely when I got back Maggie came running back to me in worried about me getting killed. should I tell her about the money!
My name is Nathan Nichols and I have had a really ruff life. shortly after that night My brother Chris attempted killing me. He Cracked my head open with soda bottles and video tapes and anything you could think of. I went to the hospital more times then the doctor I believe. Oddly enough I bet he never thought I would be saving his life.
Do you know when you join the army you have to vow to never leave a fallen soldier behind. You must do all you can do and be all you can be to make sure you and your unit and soldiers are safe. Sucks huh, I know scenes Chris and I and War partners. Chris went into the army reserves when I was still a senior in high school, to make something of his life. He finished basic and AIT and moved back so Sparta to work at fort.
Finlay the time came for me BIG Nathan to go to basic. I though it was fun and it changed a lot of things about my life. The day came I was going home! I board that plane and fly to the air port in Madison Wisconsin. I get to the air port and wait. I waited 3 hours and no show of my parents. Neither my mom or my dad showed. My dad was supposed to get me I thought. I had just talked to him on the phone that morning before I left fort. I called him and he answered and asked if i was home already. I told him that he was supposed to pick me up! He informed me that something had come up at the house and he asked my mom to pick me up.
So I hung the phone up and called her. No answer..... Finally I got a call back, and there was a man on the line. He told me that my mother was going threw an intersection and a 18 wheeler couldn't stop due to ice and crush the car. My mom was in a coma and my step dad was killed. I was devastated I didn't know what to do, I doped to the ground and cried. I didn't get home for three days later, I stayed at the air port and just sat there. My dad Finally showed up in worry about me and took me home. After all the changes in basic and all I did to make a great job so I can support my family they are all gone.
Two days after I had arrived at home my brother and I got a call from our platoon commander. My Chris and I we being deployed On a Secreat mission with 12 other guys to roam the mountains in Afghanistan to locate bin laden. The worst part was, the orders said we left at 1700 hours, It was 1400! No saying good by no time for recovery, no staying with my mom in her time of need. We were being deployed and there was nothing we could do about it. Of course my brother thought the whole reason for what had happened was my fault, so we were always fighting. We were boarding the plane and I tripped and he made a smart comment. He blabbered to me " good job why don't you kill your self when your at it, Get up" I got up and punched him in the chest and attempted to get him in a choke hold. our commander grabbed up and threw us in different directions in one motion. He yelled that we need to knock it off , what had happened was a shame but it wasn't either one of our faults, and that chis and I were war buddies and we couldn't leave a 10 foot radius of each other. If one got yelled at we both did push ups. If one needed help the other was there. If one needed to go to the bathroom the other one was the door so people couldn't see.
It was horrible, We fought so much. We kept bumping each other. Finally we got off the plane and went straight to a helicopter. We arrived in the mountains about 30 minutes later and had to ridge line down. As soon as we landed we were taking fire. Three men In front of me Were shot! Chris Jumped behind a huge rock and I attempted to but my shoe was caught on a branch. A Gorilla(thats what we call the enemy) seen me and started shooting. I Really don't know were they learned how to shoot but they cant hit me. Chris unloading a full clip on him runs to me and help get me shoe out. Looking up I see someone standing behind him. Without thought I kicked up and forced him to his knees and shot him in the neck. To my surprise it was a gorilla!!!
With in minutes Chris and I were threw people and all of your back up was dead. We had killed a close to 70 people. Chris was walking crouching down trying not to be seeing and he fell in to some hole. I rushed over to find him and he was in a choke hold by the man we were look for him self. Bin Laden was there WE FOUND HIM!!! I yelled to drop his weapon that we were the united states army and I am required to use force to disable the weapon. All he did was yell in Arabic and I couldn't understand it! So I gave Chris the eye and he kicked his leg and I shot his Hand. Chris then swiftly kicked him to the ground and zip tied his hands behind his back.
I called for transportation and gave them our coordinates. They finally arrived about 30 minutes later and about craped them selfs when they seen just use two and we had him. When we got back Chris and I receive the Medal of honor and we bother received a pay stub that read, "$250,000,000". We didn't know that the army still had the 500 million reward on him and we got it. It was amazing, we were being flown home on our own privet jet. We were all on the tv and all over the news . people loves us and Iraq Crashed and the war ended!
Chris and I put our money into an account together and payed for our mom to get better. She Finally made a full recovery and didn't believe anything that happened. With the rest of the money we slit it up and gave some to every one of our soldiers family's. That makes 13 family's and 14 guys millionaires and the end to a war. Never thought one night of fear could turn into a life time of wealth and a country of happiness did you!
Now Chris and Megan are married and have a baby boy on the way. As for me I'm taking car of my mom and trying to make sure my brothers and mine friendship stays strong. Strangely when I got back Maggie came running back to me in worried about me getting killed. should I tell her about the money!

4 Comments:
At December 4, 2007 at 10:37 AM ,
Gordon said...
Ummm.....WHAT???
At December 4, 2007 at 10:42 AM ,
Ali(solation) said...
I have the same thought as Adam....
At December 4, 2007 at 10:53 AM ,
Anonymous said...
Bicaw?!? I... what? bomb? the story... I... can't think... brain... OWWW... please... help... I...
At December 4, 2007 at 12:02 PM ,
Unknown said...
The storyline has potential. You will gain readers if the storyline flows and grammatically errors are reduced. Type up the script on MS Word before posting.
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